January 19 2014

Writing Style Attempt: Writing From a Picture (A young girl feeds a small tab to her father)

 

The Perfect Accumulation of Love Represented Through the Mundane

 

I can imagine her Mother dictating her regimen.

The kids at school had been getting the sickness and Carolyn – with her boisterous attitude and penchant for make believe in the primary grade sandbox - made her susceptible to germs of all strain, shape and form.

It might have been a children’s aspirin, or maybe a drip of castor oil slipped onto a communion wafer, no matter what it was, Carolyn would have taken it like a champ. Being the eldest she had already learned how to act not only responsibly but as an example. She knew she must be a pillar of her small tribe.

I suspect after taking the tablet herself, she became alarmed, sensitive to the fact that her father (whom spent every evening in his study)would be the one who missed the dolling out of such an important dosage.   

This works better with the picture for reference...shit.

I'm feeling like I'm failing at this challenge. I need a little more confidence and definitely more time in a day.

fuck.

-ClassyBiped