Writing Style Attempt: Continuation of Second Person (I'm liking this)
When you wake up, your last three toes on your right foot
are numb. You flex both feet and move your ankles in opposite circles to return
the blood flow and regain sensation. The cat, having spent its morning at the
edge of the bed, sees this movement and immediately attacks the blanket
catching its front nails in the stitching of the quilt and driving its teeth
into your toes. You feel nothing physically, but kick him to the ground anyway.
He lands loudly on the ancient wood floor and scampers off with contempt
leaving a scent of revenge in the air behind him.
You claw at your phone on the windowsill behind your head,
refusing to move more than necessary. Once found, it lights up on its own and
glaringly welcomes you to your morning. It’s
5:30am. The phone knows this, but doesn’t care. Just like the idiot cat,
and anxious you, once it’s awoken from its slumber there is no more sleep mode.
Maybe tea will help. The only good coffee you own needs to
be ground and you’re pretty positive that that much intensive labor two hours
before sunrise is forbidden by at least one religion. The heat from the gas
burner is so comforting you place your face next to it. Why is this smell so alluring? The cat makes three figure eights
around your ankles while sounding his alarm. Fine. You dump him his food and tell him nicely to shut up. As you
leave the apartment, he looks up at you ready to meow in protest but before he
can begin, you point your finger at him sternly and he yawns instead. Good. You say. In the hallway you can
hear him licking at something furiously.
***
Three hours into work, you realize that tea was at best, a mediocre
choice. In fact, you question if you possibly drank a useless hot liquid in
place of a useful one. It doesn’t matter now. You shift your weight from your
left leg to your right. Wait. You
think. Are my toes still numb? Less concerned about the fact that one’s body parts
should not stay numb for such a period of time, you worry that you have just
spent six plus hours unaware that they were numb at all. You scan the room for
anyone who might notice you and when it’s clear, you thrust the side of your
right foot full force to the side of your desk.
Nothing.
You think about the theory that a person cannot willfully inflict
harm on itself with the force that they can upon another. This worries you and
so you get up to find Whitney in hopes he will be able to help.
(To be continued.)
Friends – I worked too long today – gonna sleep and venture
forth tomorrow!
-ClassyB
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